I may be biased because i actually prepared an submitted a video for Berserkers as well. But i thought i would jump in and remark anyways as somebody who has been in your shoes.
Heres a few things that caught me eye.
1) You spelled Berserker wrong.
2) The layout and general idea of roleplaying the character for the guide was spectacular
But maybe in implementation not so great due to it feeling a little more scripted then you may have intended. mad props for the attempt tho, for what it is worth it was entertaining.
3) Your guide is the very most "noob" guide there is, you can learn nearly everything you talked about while still on the island of dawn. I find it better when making a guide to focus on things that aren't intuitive enough for people to notice on their own right away... or some cases at all.
This being said, i still gave you a positive thumb, because i felt the effort you made was warranting of it. (people down thumb too easily these days) You took a risk on the style of the video... and i think it came out pretty well over all.... The information presented on the other hand was i think the real weakness. You roleplayed your character for the voice, but you present your characters play style if that makes any sense? If you had this would have been spectacular.
Anyways a valiant effort none the less! Best of luck to you.
Edited by: Arvalo
over 1 year ago