((Hello, everyone. Since I decided to roll on the RP server, I figured it would be nice to give my character a little backstory to go with him. I've never played on an RP server in any MMO before, nor have I ever done any roleplaying at all, so this will be my first time.))

((The bio I have created for my character was supposed to be short and simple, but I ended up writing a whooping 3,000+ word backstory. I think it's a bit cliche in most places, but at the same time I think it works. Creative writing has never been my strong point, but I am looking to improve my writing no matter what, so please feel free to critique if you wish.))

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OK...

So...

Hello everyone.

Before I introduce myself, I want to make a few things clear:

I don’t do “cute”. Anything I do that you would consider cute is me being tough as psychically possible.
Please don’t make fun of my ears.
No, you can't touch them, either.
Take me seriously, or else.
No, I don’t want a carrot (or at least not a raw carrot. Offer me something nice and prepared like the cuisine from Allemantheia. That would be nice.)
DO NOT PET ME.

Right… Now that that’s out of the way…



Hi.

The name’s Artham. A daring and fierce Popori, at your service.
Born in Pora Elinu, raised with many friends in Popolion.
My weapon of choice: The slayer sword.
And with this sword in my two hands, I plan to take on the world.

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Full bio: http://mikedot.blogspot.com/2012/05/tera-na-artham-hot-headed-popori.html

Well, I look forward to meeting you my Popori brother!

I think you'll do just fine with Role Playing...

Quote: Egophile on 04/18/2012, 10:17 PM - view

This. You seem to have your head on straight. Good read.

I also liked your use of the word "plebeian." It sounds like something Topaz would say, although she tends to favor "fool" and "insect" a good deal more.

Quote: Gastalt on 04/18/2012, 09:27 PM - view

Ah, Gastalt, the Charismatic Cat. I've heard of your plans to run for Vanarch and while I don't care too much for politics I'll be eager to hear what you have in store for a campaign.
Hope to see you soon, too.

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Thanks for the responses so far. I'm looking to complete the rest of my backstory this weekend. Will bump the thread when it's done.

Lols, great to meet you! Another fine addition to Celestial Hills :)

HAhaha,I laugh everytime I read your story ^_^. You are a good story writer (look at myself and sigh)
Oh, and that is a cute little bunny, eh?
... please dont hit me with that giant sword *_*

Bumping because I'm almost done with my bio!

Sorry for bumping again, but I'm finally done with it. Took me awhile and ended up over 3000+ words long YAY.

Also: Pictures and artwork.

Really looking for some critique on my writing, as well.

Why hello there! I believe I saw you in the Circus Maximus the other day. You were very brave and I'm sure you did your best and will get even better as time goes on!

I hope to see you around and hope you have a lot of fun. Be safe!

~ Kawaiiko