First of all, allow me to express my approval of your writing skills. Though there are usually a fair number of excellent roleplayers on games such as this, I find that very few of them have a grasp of the literary talent that I...prefer, if not expect from mature roleplayers. The few days I spent with Tera in-game did little to inspire a depth of character to the NPCs or much urgency to the goings-on behind the crisis but your little introduction helped add something to that, whether it may be canonical or not. :)
Being a disabled veteran, I have a great deal of free time on my hands and spent most of that time running table top RPGs such as AD&D, Exalted, Tinker's Dam and dozens of smaller ones as well as text-based online games and I find that character development amongst people willing to play along is one of the most rewarding experiences a gamer can enjoy. Consider this my application, I am certainly looking forward to finding out if your guild can bring those elements into a hack n' slack environment like Tera.